The music score given is solely based on the listening ear of a first impression. Judgment calls, biases and opinions should not be taken as concrete. The discerning ear of Karlin may differ from that of another.

Wow effect - 6/10
Vocal Quality - 7/10
Melody strength - 7/10
Lyric diction - 7/10
Lyric comprehension - 7/10
Recording quality - 6/10
Instrumental presentation - 6 /10
Overall song performance - 6 / 10
Would I recommend this song to others. ???, maybe

Remarks;
The song has potential Tim, it needs the support of a band for a better rating. A definite advantage is to post your lyric's under the title description(see your profile) above on this page. You may also want to consider shorting your song; the listener soon gets bored if the hooks aren't baited.

Karlin Mathew